2007-09-18, 03:33 AM
nak Wrote:Also, I'd get rid of the term "easy" that seems to be sprinkled throughout the article, as in:
"Easy to understand and control User Interface"
or
"TV Guide for easy scheduling of recordings"
Those do read like an advertisement. I would change those to:
"Built in Graphical User Interface to control the system"
"TV Guide for scheduling of recordings"
Another example of an ackward sounding item:
"No-delay live preview TV, with the fastest possible channel change time."
That reads like some silly advertisement.
There are others as well. Stick to the pure facts, not opinion mixed with facts.
It would make it read more professionally and less fanboy-ish.
Those are all very good suggestions. When I thought I'd look into changing the page, I was so surprised how easy it was. I created an account, and that puts my name to the changes, but even if you just want to jump in and edit, it will let you. It just records your IP. That's good enough I think. Keeps people accountable.
Why don't you make those edits?
Frank Z
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